An important person in history - a music artist
Shinichi Suzuki is the person who gives children the chance to touch the violin and develop their abilities. He taught the instrument to kids and trained up brilliant artists. He believed all the children had potential talent.
Just after the Second World War, he organized the association for the children who had been taking the violin. That was for instructors as well. He named it the Talent Education Research Institute and known as Suzuki Method around the world now.
I suppose keep practicing instruments is demanding for kids also for adults. In the middle of confusing after wartime, his passion and faith would illuminate children those who in the era and adult might have hope with their children. That is why I respect him.
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An important person in history - a music artist
Shinichi Suzuki is the person who gives children the chance to learn the violin and develop their abilities. He taught the instrument to kids and trained up brilliant artists. He believed all the children had potential talent.Just after the Second World War, he organized an association for the children who had been taking the violin lessons. It was for instructors as well. He named it the Talent Education Research Institute and is now known as the Suzuki Method around the world.
I suppose to keep practicing instruments is demanding for both kids and adults. In the middle of the confusion after wartime, his passion and faith would brighten the lives of the children in the era and adults might have hope with their children. That is why I respect him.
Hello Ryoko,
A nice piece of writing about a very important person. There are a few problems with articles, I know this is a big problem for Japanese students because you don't have articles in Japanese. Just a couple of other corrections.
Well done.
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