today in my note book
today I woke up at 4.30 AM it was still dark outside
MOM and Dad were waking up too at 4 AM so I sitted with them until 9 am then slept again and woke up at 2.30 pm
then I feeded my two cats and then wasted almost my all time watching videos on the youtube until now
so I am sitting with you now writting about what happened today
and asking for advice
Thank you :)
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Today in my note book
Today when I woke up at 4.30 AM it was still dark outside. (We start sentences with a capital letter [ABC] and end it with a period [.])Mom and dad ("dad" is not a proper noun, therefore it's not in capital letter) woke up too at 4 AM too, so I sat ("sat" is past tense of "sit") with them until 9 AM then slept again and woke up at 2.30 PM.
Then I fed ("fed" is past tense of "feed") my two cats and after that, I wasted almost my all my time watching videos on the YouTube. (It's a proper noun, therefore a capital letter. Since the name of the website is officially YouTube, we write "T" with a capital letter as well) I've been watching them until now.
So, I am here with you now, writing about what happened today
and asking for advice. (Advice about what?)
Thank you. :)
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