Today’s my dinner
After I finished my job, I went to a supermarket near my apartment and bought some ingredients for a dinner.
I cooked a boiled pumpkin with soy sauce, sugar, cooking sake and sweet cooking rice wine. I have cooked it twice. It takes only about 20 minutes to cook, and it’s also delicious!
I’m looking forward to cooking it next time!
This is my dinner today!
Thank you!
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Today’s dinner [erase "my"]
After I finished work, I went to a supermarket near my apartment and bought some ingredients for dinner. [erase "a"]I cooked boiled pumpkin with soy sauce, sugar, cooking sake and sweet cooking rice wine. [erase "a"]
I have cooked it twice. It only takes about 20 minutes to cook, and it’s delicious! [erase "also"]
I’m looking forward to cooking it again!
This is my dinner today!
Thank you!
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モエコさん、I agree with all of Alex's suggestions. I will make the same changes below, and include some notes of explanation.
Today’s my dinner
After I finished my job work*, I went to a supermarket near my apartment and bought some ingredients for a dinner.I cooked a boiled pumpkin with in soy sauce, sugar, cooking sake and sweet cooking rice wine**. I have cooked it made this twice before***. It only takes only about 20 minutes to cook, and it’s also really delicious!
I’m looking forward to cooking it next time!
This is my dinner today!
Thank you!
美味しそうね！
* "my job" -> "work" - It's more natural to say "work" (I went to work. I went shopping after work. I went drinking with friends from work. etc.). The difference is subtle. In Japanese, 仕事 and 働く are both used, but sometimes one makes more sense than the other.
** みりん？We have this in the US, but a lot of people don't know about it. It's great for cooking!
*** "I have cooked it twice" - I think native English speaker would think you meant 2回煮た。But if you want to say この料理を2回前に作りました you would say "I've made this twice before" or I've made this two times before"
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Today’s my dinner
After I finished at my job, I went to a supermarket near my apartment and bought some ingredients for a dinner.I cooked a boiled pumpkin with soy sauce, sugar, cooking sake and sweet cooking rice wine. I have cooked it this twice before. It takes only about 20 minutes to cook, and it’s also delicious!
I’m looking forward to cooking it next time!
This is my dinner today!
Thank you!
Nice.
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