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My presentation ... (pleases, someone could correct my mistakes ) Hi everybody , My name is Margot I am from Peru , I dont speak and write in English very well , but its necesary in my life because I have studied foreign trade and I could apply to better job , so for this reason I need to improve this language . I have a lot of experience in my carrier exporting products to Latin America .Currently I am working in Lima Chamber of Commerce like analyst of products originating in Peru for this reason I must know trade agreements very good, also I have to read some thing in English in this agreements.

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Hi everybody! My name is Margot, and I am from Peru. I don't speak and write in English very well, but it's necesary in my life because I have studied foreign trade and I could apply to a better job; because of this, I need to improve my English.
I have a lot of experience in my career exporting products to Latin America. Currently, I am working in the Lima Chamber of Commerce as an analyst of products originating in Peru; Because of this, I must know trade agreements very well. Also, I have to read some English in these agreements.

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My presentation ... (pleases, could someone  correct my mistakes )

Hi everybody , My name is Margot I am from Peru , I don't speak and write in English very well , but it's necessary in my life because I have studied foreign trade and I could apply for a  better job , so for this reason I need to improve this language .


I have a lot of experience in my career exporting products to Latin America .Currently I am working in Lima Chamber of Commerce as an analyst of products originating in Peru for this reason I must know trade agreements very well, also I have to read some things in English in this agreements.

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