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China flagYi Zhang
A Few Sentences from Today's Study. The scientific revolution, which started 500 years ago, shaped the course of human history. This research kick-started the professor’s work in physics. I wish that one day, I will have a BMW model i8 which can speed-up within seconds. The research project got underway. He became obsessed with data.

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Hello, Yi. Your English is correct. The only thing a bit odd is the phrase “speed-up within seconds”. If we mention seconds, then we should get specific with our measurements: “…that can go from zero to sixty in 2.3 seconds (or whatever; I’m not into cars). Or we could drop the measure words entirely: “…with powerful acceleration.”


In your third example, you might want to connect the sentences to highlight the relationship: “As research project got underway, he became obsessed with data.


One more thing — the use of “study” in the title is a bit unclear. Used countably, it seems to indicate a research study, but I think you may mean “language study” or “study session” or something like that.

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