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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I was born in Australia. but I grew up in japan. so I can't speak English very well. I hope I want to go to Australia on Vacation someday.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I was born in Australia. but I grew up in japan.
so I can't speak English very well.

(it would help the flow of your sentence to connect these three sentences: I was born in Austrilia, but (since) I grew up in Japan, I can't speak English very well.)  Japan is capitalized, since it is a proper noun. 


I hope (This is redundant.) I want to go to Australia on Vacation vacation (does not need to be capitalized, since it is not a proper noun) someday.

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Thank you. I'm sorry for my late reply. I should have written to you sooner. Because I haven't got used to [italki.com] I didn't notice your reply.
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Your English is quite good! I hope your wish to come to Australia on vacation (note: small v) will come true soon!

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