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Living to change About four years ago, I used to eat fast food almost every day, and I was overweight. I was not happy about myself, and I used to be sick. So I longing make a change. To begin with, I wanted to have better scores, and that implicates long hours studying all the topics of each subject. I didn't have time to take a breath, so I started to eat snacks and hamburgers instead of healthy food. Thus, I started putting on a lot of weight fastly. I used to go to the doctor every month, due to the fact I usually had allergies. So, after that, I notice that I needed to lose weight. When I was twelve, I used to run long distances with my father. So I started running twice per week, but I injured my low back after one month. I was awful, and after being treated, I couldn't run like before. After a while, I give up doing exercise, until, two years later, I started to go to the swimming pool. Soon, I could swim the whole pool without effort, and then I started to eat a healthy diet. In the end, I am not overweight anymore. Even though I do not like to do exercise, nowadays, I play basketball all the weekends, and that is how I keep in shape. I have ever felt better before.

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Living to change

About four years ago, I used to eat fast food almost every day, and I was overweight. I was not happy about myself, and I used to be sick. So I longed to make a change.
I wanted to have better results to begin with, and that implicates long hours of studying all the topics of each subject. I didn't have the time to take a breath, so I started to eat snacks and hamburgers instead of healthy food. Thus, I started putting on a lot of weight quickly. I used to go to the doctor every month, due to the fact I usually had allergies.
So, after that, I noticed that I needed to lose weight.
When I was twelve, I used to run long distances with my father. So I started running twice per week, but I injured my lower back after one month. I felt awful and after being treated, I couldn't run like before.
After a while, I give up exercising until, two years later, I started to go to the swimming pool. Soon, I could swim the length of the entire pool without an effort and then I started to eat a healthy diet.
In the end, I am not overweight anymore. Even though I do not like to exercise, nowadays, I play basketball every weekend and that is how I keep in shape. I have never felt better before.
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Living to change

About four years ago, I used to eat fast food almost every day, and I was overweight. I was not happy with myself, and It made me to be sick. So I was longing make a change.


To begin with, I wanted to have better scores, and that implicates long hours of studying all the topics of each subject. I didn't have time to take a breath, so I started to eat snacks and hamburgers instead of healthy food. Thus, I started putting on a lot of weight quickly. I used to go to the doctor every month, due to the fact I usually had allergies.


So, after that, I notice that I needed to lose weight.


When I was twelve, I used to run long distances with my father. So I started running twice per week, but I injured my lower back after one month. I was awful, and after being treated, I couldn't run like before.
After a while, I gave up doing exercise, until, two years later, I started to go to the swimming pool. Soon, I could swim the whole pool without effort, and then I started to eat a healthy diet.
In the end, I am not overweight anymore. Even though I do not like to do exercise, nowadays, I play basketball on the weekends, and that is how I keep in shape. I have never felt better before.

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