Ticket for 2020 Olympic Games
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The application to buy the ticket for 2020 Olympic games is supposed to start online in April.
The applicant needs to register for the website to buy the tickets online and then apply for the tickets that they want to see the games. The result of the lottery will be announced in June.
The tickets which are not needed for the lottery will be sold in the coming autumn. The stores which sell the tickets will open in Tokyo in the next spring.
The ticket prices are different depending on the games and the kinds of seats.
The Paralympic games' tickets are supposed to be sold after this summer.
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Ticket for 2020 Olympic Games
Could anyone proofread my sentences?The application to buy the ticket(s) for the 2020 Olympic games is supposed to start online in April.
The applicant needs to register on the website to buy the tickets online and then apply for the tickets to the games that they'd like to see they want to see the games. The results of the lottery will be announced in June.
The tickets which are not needed for the lottery will be sold in the coming autumn. The stores which will sell the tickets in Tokyo will open in Tokyo in the next spring.
The ticket prices are different depending on the games and the kinds of seats. (we might call them "tiers" which is like "level" of seat. for example Diamond level, gold level, silver level seats. We could also say Tier 1, tier 2 tier 3, etc..)
The Paralympic games tickets are supposed to be sold after this summer. (Is this about Paralympics or Olympics?)
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