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Its flavor will get you speechless
SANTA CATALINA LAUNCHES A NEW EARLY HARVEST EXTRA VIRGIN OLIVE OIL, RICH IN NATURAL ANTIOXIDANTS AND VITAMINS.
Premium quality extra virgin olive oil, made from the first olives harvested while still green which makes for enriched organoleptic properties.
Once again, Santa Catalina bet on quality and innovation. This time, it has developed (or it has introduced after much development)(1) launched to develop, for the first time in its history, an oil with superior organoleptic and healthy properties: Early harvest EVOO.
The process of making collection of these olives is done while they are still green. The olive performance is can be much less, but the quality is unquestionable.
Once the product was achieved and the desired quality was recognized, an attractive packaging was created to match according to the quality of this oil. An attractive groundbreaking design that will give much to talk about among consumers.
Its flavor will leave you speechless
(1) Launched to develop does not work well here
Muy bien!
Its flavor will get leave you speechless
SANTA CATALINA LAUNCHES A NEW EARLY HARVEST EXTRA VIRGIN OLIVE OIL, RICH IN NATURAL ANTIOXIDANTS AND VITAMINS.Premium quality extra virgin olive oil, made from the first olives, harvested while still green which makes for enriched organoleptic properties (is it OK that this is not a complete sentence?)
Once again, Santa Catalina bet on quality and innovation (other options ¨has focused on quality and innovation¨ or ¨has prioritized quality and innovation.¨ The word ¨bet¨ gives a sense of gambling...like ¨apostar a¨). This time, it has launched to developed, for the first time in its history, an oil with superior organoleptic and healthy properties: early harvest EVOO. (A suggestion: you could start this sentence with, ¨Our company has developed, for the first time in its history, ¨)
The collection of these olives is done when they are still green. The olive performance is much less (perhaps ¨the harvest yield¨, unless the term seems too technical for your customers. But I would change this in some way because ¨olive performance¨ is unclear about whether it is talking about quantity or quality), but the quality is unquestionable.
Once the product was obtained and the desired quality was recognized, an attractive packaging was created according to the quality (suggestion: ¨to reflect the quality¨) of this oil. An attractive design, groundbreaking design, and that will give consumers much to talk about among consumers.
Its flavor will get leave you speechless
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