A walk in the park
Sue was walking in the park when something unusual happened. At this moment she was hit by a snowball. Sue looked to the different sides and didn't espy something unusual, except a snowdrift with a piece of sand that was behind her. One second later a new snowball hit her back from the side of the snowdrift. She turned back and saw a handsome boy, who stayed in the front of her and was smiling. Initial she thought that had never seen his, but after some seconds she realised that had seen his in a school before. It was a young man who looked in early 20's and has some wrinkles on his face. The eyes on his face were blue with a green hue. His sight stunned her at the same moment as she looked at him.
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Sue was walking in the park when something unusual happened!. Suddenly she was hit by a snowball she looked around shocked but didn't notice anything unusual, except a snowdrift with a piece of sand that was behind her. a second later another snowball hit her back from the side of the snowdrift. She turned back and saw a handsome boy, who was stood in the front of her and was smiling. Initially she didnt recognise him but after a few seconds she realised that she had seen him before in her school. It was a young man who looked in his early 20's and had some wrinkles on his face. His eyes were blue with a hint of green. His sight stunned her the very moment she looked at him.
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Sue was walking in the park when something unusual happened. At this moment she was hit by a snowball. Sue looked around and didn't notice something unusual, except a snowdrift with a piece of sand that was behind her. One second later a new snowball hit her back from the side of the snowdrift. She turned back and saw a handsome boy, who stayed in the front of her and was smiling. Initially she thought that she had never saw him before, but after some seconds she realised that she had saw him at a school before. He is a young man who looked in early 20'th and has some wrinkles on his face. His eyes are blue with a green hue. His sight stunned her while she was looking at him.
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