Please correct my essay 3
I live in a block of flats. That flat is private property. A house built in a new modern area. The house is isolated from the main road and located near to the forest. So it doesn't noisy and messy. The flat is small but smart. It calls a studio-apartment. There are the kitchen, workplace, and bed in one place. These parts are separated design. The apartment has two large windows so there is enough light before lunch. I like my apartment now but my perfect place for lives is a small house which located in suburbs. I'd like to breath fresh air and walking to nature. If I need to work or shopping I would go to the city by car quickly. My perfect house has modern furniture, a swimming pool, and a small gym. It has a convenient design. It is cozy and bright.
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Please correct my essay 3
I live in a block of flats. The That flat is private property. A It is a* house built in a new modern area. The house is isolated from the main road and located near to the forest. So it doesn't isn't noisy and or messy. The flat is small but smart. It's called a studio-apartment. There are is the a kitchen, workplace, and bed in one place. These parts are separated by design. The apartment has two large windows so there is enough light before lunch. I like my apartment now but my perfect place for lives living is** a small house which is located in the suburbs. I'd like to breath fresh air and walking to in nature. If I need to work or go shopping I would go to the city by car quickly. My perfect house has modern furniture, a swimming pool, and a small gym. It has a convenient design. It is cosy and bright.*The passage makes sense and informally is fine but, strictly, each sentence should have a verb.
** As this passage is talking about something hypothetical rather than actual, 'would be' might be a better verb tense choice, instead of 'is'.
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Please correct my essay 3
I live in a block of flats. That flat is private property. A house was built in a new modern area. The house is isolated from the main road and located near to the forest. So it doesn't noisy and messy. The flat is small but smart. It calls a studio-apartment. There are the kitchen, workplace, and bed in one place. These parts are separated design by different design. The apartment has two large windows so there is enough light before lunchtime or midday. I like my apartment now but my perfect place for living is a small house which located in suburbs. I'd like to breath fresh air and walking in nature. If I need to work or go shopping, I would go to the city by car quickly. My perfect house has modern furniture, a swimming pool, and a small gym. It has a convenient design. It will be designed convenient. It is cosy and bright.Want to progress faster?
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