Diary 1 - My friend Maggie
Maggie, one of my close friends, invited me to have dinner in her dormitory. I visited her in a happy mood after class. She cooked me the dinner - tomato spaghetti. It was a delicious meal. We haven't seen each other for quite a while as she went to volunteer in Nepal for six months. She is such a brave and independent girl. If I were her, I pobably would not have the courage to leave my hometown alone for such a long period of time. I do want to try one though. Maybe one day, I'll go somewhere alone to explore the world. Who knows?
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Diary 1 - My friend Maggie
Maggie, one of my close friends, invited me to have dinner in her dormitory. I visited her in a happy mood after class. She cooked me the dinner - tomato spaghetti. It was a delicious meal. We haven't seen each other for quite a while as she went to volunteer in Nepal for six months. She is such a brave and independent girl. If I were her, I pobably would not have the courage to leave my hometown alone for such a long period of time. I do want to try one though. Maybe one day, I'll go somewhere alone to explore the world. Who knows?Dinner is just "dinner" - not "the dinner." "I do want to try one".... you need to specify what "one" might be. "I do want to try, myself, though." Or "I do want to try one trip, though."
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