Paraphrasing Practice
Here is a sentence I read from the news: "the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising"
There are some practices, that i tried to write in different ways:
- The increasing sales figure/income among reliable customers reflect the quality of advertising
- An Increase incomes from sales could be seen from the power of advertising
- An incease amount of consumption from a product is evident from the quality of advertising agent
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Paraphrasing Practice
Here is a sentence I read from the news: "the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising"There are some practices, that i tried to write in different ways:
- The increasing sales figures/income among reliable goods sold to customers reflects the quality importance of advertising
- An Increase incomes from in sales could be seen from is a result of the power of advertising
- An increase in the amount of consumption consumable from a products is evident evidence from of the quality of advertising agent
Other paraphrases are:
- Due to the importance of advertising, popular consumer goods sales have increased significantly.
- Consumer goods sales have skyrocketed due to strong effective advertising.
Note, the term "consumer goods" means products that are purchased by individual people, as opposed to businesses. This would mean cell phones, or cans of food. Consumer goods would not apply to industrial products such as raw steel or machine supplies.
Thank you
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