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Day 4 - Saturday with my family Hi everyone.

Today I woke up around 10:30am, I know, later, but I worked until 08:00am, So I was very tired.

The morning I change my room, I was tired my room.

I cleaned my backyard, after I take a shower very cold because here in Brazil is very very hot!

Almost forgot, yesterday I went to mall do shopping. I really needed some new clothes, but I bought one short and two t-shirts just, here in Brazil is very expensive some clothes.

Well tonight my family and I will eat in my father-in-law's house, it's a our costume every saturday eat my wife's dad house.

Well I think today. I will come back tomorrow!

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Day 4 - Saturday with my family

Hi everyone.

Today I woke up around 10:30am, I know, later, but I worked until 08:00am, so I was very tired.

In the morning I change (re-arranged?) my room, (I was getting tired of my room?)

I cleaned my backyard, after I took a very cold shower because here in Brazil, it is very, very hot!

I almost forgot -  yesterday I went to the mall to do the shopping. I really needed some new clothes, but I only bought one pair of shorts and two T-shirts just, because here in Brazil is very expensive some clothes are very expensive.

Well, tonight my family and I will be eating at my father-in-law's house, it's a our routine every Saturday to eat at my wife's dad's house.

Well I think today I will come back tomorrow!

GOOD JOB, I HOPE THAT MY CORRECTIONS REFLECT WHAT YOU WERE WRITING. IF NOT, LET ME KNOW AND I'LL HELP :-)

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