Old man and the sea
Hello. I read this book old man and the sea. Old man is fisherman. A young boy was help him, but he wasn't catch the fish. His body is weak but his eyes aren't weak. His eyes are brave and gimlet eye. A young boy was says go to fishing at the old man but old man says you take in some money so stay there. They go to the store and drink the beer. Fishermen were laugh at the old man but he doesn't angry at fishermen. At the next day, he ride the boat and go to the fishing. The old man go the very far. First, he catch the tuna. second, he fight the very big fish. It is very big and strong fish. He fight the fish while his hand is hurt. He is very strong. third, he catch the dolphin. He eat the tuna and the dolphin. Tuna is nutritious but dolphin is saltless. The strong fish fight the old man but strong fish caught the old man. Old man was very happy because he catch the strong fish. He catch the shark. He tie the shark next to the boat. He was go to the home but there are so many shark in the sea. They are eat this the meat. The old man guard the strong fish but shark eat the meat. Sadly, he save the head and fin. A young boy saw the strong fish. He was surprised. A man says the boy this is a shark. The old man is very deep dream. I think that the old man is very brave he not scare the dead. I want to be like a old man.
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Hello. I read this book "old man and the sea". Old man is a fisherman.
A young boy was helping(was/is/are verb+ing) him, but he wasn't catching the fish. His body is weak but his eyes are not weak. His eyes are brave and with a piercing stare.
A young boy told him to go fishing, but the old man said to him you take in some money so stay there.
They go to the store and drink beer(no specific noun - no need to put "the"). Fishermen were laughing (was/is/are verb+ing) at the old man but he wasn't angry at fishermen(??).
At the next day, he ride the boat and goes fishing. The old man goes very far. First, he catches tuna. Next, he fights the big fish. It is a very big and strong fish. He fight the fish while his hand is hurt. He is very strong. Afterwards, he catches the dolphin. He ate the tuna and the dolphin. Tuna is nutritious but the dolphin is bland. The strong fish fights the old man but the old man catches the fishes eventually. The old man was very happy because he catches the strong fish. He catches a shark. He tie the shark next to the boat. He was going to go (the is not needed here) home but there are so many sharks in the sea. They ate the shark.
The old man guards (singular noun + verb + s) the strong fish but the sharks ate the meat. Sadly, he only managed to save the head and fin. A young boy saw the strong fish. He was surprised. A man said to the boy that this is a shark. The old man is in a very deep dream. I think that the old man is very brave and he is not scared of the dead. I want to be like the old man.
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Sorry pls delete. My italki has a glitch
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Sorry pls delete. My italki has a glitch
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