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Industry 4.0 (Please I need help in this sort article) Since the beginning of industrial revolution, the industrial system it has been adapting and evolved and constantly. Where at the beginning of the 21st century, this was called the fourth industrial revolution or better known as Industry 4.0, it involves a control system through of artificial intelligence. In that way is possible to take some decisions automatically. This type of technology has a big impact on its implementation, for the company and all them who are participating in the direct or indirect form into its implementation, maintenance or management of this system. To support the changes is necessary that the future professionals must be qualified and the universities may be aligned within their curricular grade on this new industry transformation. So, the aim of this study is to verify the engineer students knowledge of 4th and 5th year of a degree at the production engineer of 5 main University from São Paulo to analyze the introduction of this new demand in the market.

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Industry 4.0

Since the beginning of the industrial revolution, industrial systems have been adapting and evolved constantly. At the beginning of the 21st century, this was called the fourth industrial revolution or better known as Industry 4.0, and it involves a control system through use of artificial intelligence. In that way it is possible to take some decisions automatically.
This type of technology has a big impact on the way it's implemented, for the company and all those who are participating in the direct or indirect form of its system implementation, maintenance or management.
To support the changes of this new industry transformation it is necessary that the future professionals must be qualified and the universities be aligned with their curricula.* So, the aim of this study is to verify the engineer students knowledge of 4th and 5th year of a degree at the production engineer of 5 main University from São Paulo to analyze the introduction of this new demand in the market.**

[* "Curriculums" is another way to spell the plural of curricula. You are talking about several universities (plural) so together they have multiple curricula.

** Two phrases you use in this final sentence are unclear to me. In English "knowledge of 4th and 5th year of a degree" means "engineering students are aware that there are 4 and 5 year degree programs" but I doubt that is what you meant. And "production engineer of 5 main University from São Paulo" is unclear. Perhaps you mean "engineers produced from 5 main universities in São Paulo". I think what you are trying to say by your final sentence is: So, the aim of this study is to analyze if 4 and 5 year degree programs at 5 main São Paulo universities are producing engineers that are capable of fulfilling the needs of this new demand in the market. ]

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