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A story lesson 19 In mid-December the head of our organization decided to organize a Christmas party and passed out tasks to everyone. Kate bite off - decorating the room. Brought a Christmas tree and put up. Bought masquerade costumes to go around for all party members. Helen offered to Kate help in decorating the room all in all. But Kate didn’t put up with Helen and thought that Helen would just was in she’s way. But as it turned out- in vain she thought so. All week- day in and day out Kate decorated the room and the Christmas tree, but understand that one will not have time to do everything in time. She apologized and asked Helen to catch up with decorations. Helen agreed and they continued to work together. Kate told apart - work together faster.

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A story lesson 19

In mid-December the head of our organization decided to organize a Christmas party and passed out tasks to everyone.
Kate bite (wrong form) off - decorating the room.
Brought a Christmas tree and put it up.
Bought masquerade costumes to go around for all party members (wrong word order).
Helen offered to Kate help in decorating the room all in all.
But Kate didn’t put up with Helen and thought that Helen would just was (wrong form) in she’s (wrong form) way.
But as it turned out- in vain she thought so. All week- day in and day out Kate decorated (continuous tense would be better) the room and the Christmas tree, but understand (wrong form) that one will (wrong form - your narration is in the past) not have time to do everything in time.
She apologized and asked Helen to catch up with decorations.
Helen agreed and they continued to work together. Kate told apart (What do you mean?) - work together faster.


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