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A inviting letter Dear Jason, I am writing this letter to inform you that I have been moved to my new apartment. All things have been settled well. The new community is , a shorter distance school is necessary for our daughter. We would like to provide a better school for her and even more, we can pick her up on time and we won’t stuck in traffic any more. It is also convenience for us to stock up in the supermarket which locate in our community. We can spend our weekend in the park nearby our apartment. The new apartment is bigger than last one, there are three bedroom and a well-equipped kitchen. As you know, I am fond of cooking, the new kitchen will assist me to prepare more gourmet for my family. I am so exciting to prepare a party for my friends. Some gourmet will be presented by myself. It would be grateful if you could attend my party on 3rd March. Hope to see you soon. Best regards, Marco

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An invitation letter  ( A letter of invitation)

Dear Jason,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I have been ( correct : I have moved ) moved to my new apartment. Everything has been settled well. The new community is ( It looks like an unfinished sentence), a shorter distance school is necessary for our daughter ( Not wrong but a better phrase could be : A school with shorter distance is necessary ...) . We would like to provide a better school for her and even more, we can pick her up on time and we won’t get stuck in traffic any more. It is also convenient for us to stock up in the supermarket which is located  in our community. We can spend our weekend in the park nearby our apartment.
The new apartment is bigger than the previous one ( former one), there are three bedrooms and a well-equipped kitchen. As you know, I am fond of cooking, the new kitchen will assist me to prepare more gourmet for my family.
I am so excited to throw a party for my friends. Some gourmet will be presented by myself. It would be great (I would be grateful) if you could attend my party on 3rd March. Hope to see you soon.
Best regards,

Marco

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