811 why agricultural land becomes less productive
Worldwide land degradation is caused by several reasons including three main reasons, over-grazing, deforestation and over-cultivation. 35% land degradation in the world is due to over-grazing, which is extremely influential in Oceania, whose total land degradation rate is 13% but 11.3% is caused by over-grazing and only 1.7% by deforestation. 30% of worldwide land degradation is owing to deforestation, which is also the main reason for the land degraded in Europe, counting for 9.8% out of a total 23%. The number is 5.5% for over-grazing and 7.7% for over-cultivation. Over-cultivation is another cause of world land degradation, counting for 28%, and other reasons except those three count for merely 7%. In North America, just 5% of land is degraded, among which 3.3% is due to over-cultivation, which is the most reason, 1.5% is caused by over-grazing, and only 0.2% is caused by deforestation.
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811 why agricultural land becomes less productive
Worldwide land degradation is caused by several factors, including over-grazing, deforestation and over-cultivation. 35% of land degradation in the world is due to over-grazing, which is extremely influential in Oceania, where the total land degradation rate is 13% but 11.3% is caused by over-grazing and only 1.7% by deforestation. 30% of worldwide land degradation is due to deforestation, which is also the main reason for the land degraded in Europe, counting for 9.8% out of a total 23%. The number is 5.5% for over-grazing and 7.7% for over-cultivation. Over-cultivation is another cause of world land degradation, counting for 28%, and other reasons except those three count for merely 7%. In North America, just 5% of land is degraded, among which 3.3% is due to over-cultivation, which is the most extensive reason. 1.5% is caused by over-grazing, and only 0.2% is caused by deforestation.0
811 why agricultural land becomes less productive
Worldwide land degradation is caused by several reasons including three main reasons, over-grazing, deforestation and over-cultivation. 35% land degradation in the world is due to over-grazing, which is extremely influential in Oceania, whose total land degradation rate is 13% but 11.3% is caused by over-grazing and only 1.7% by deforestation. 30% of worldwide land degradation is owing to deforestation, which is also the main reason for the land degraded in Europe, counting for 9.8% out of a total 23%. The number is 5.5% for over-grazing and 7.7% for over-cultivation. Over-cultivation is another cause of world land degradation, counting for 28%, and other reasons except those three count for merely 7%. In North America, just 5% of land is degraded, among which 3.3% is due to over-cultivation, which is the most reason, 1.5% is caused by over-grazing, and only 0.2% is caused by deforestation.1. reasons including three main reasons - several reasons, three of which are the main ones to look into. You're being redundant with your previous comment.
2. 35% land - 35% of land
3. influential - word choice here is a bit off, I would use 'prevalent' or 'predominant'.
4. The number is 5.5% for over-grazing and 7.7% for over cultivation - This sentence just seems to short, try and tie it in with your other sentences before or after.
5. most reason - biggest reason
6. 1.5% is - while 1.5% is
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