My daughter is seeing a human face on the ceiling…
From a couple of days ago, my 9 years old daughter sees a human face on the ceiling when she goes to bed. She says the pattern of wallpaper on the ceiling looks like a human face and the eyes scare her the most. So since then I had been sitting beside her on her bed till she fell asleep. It’s a little bid annoying because I cannot do things I could do during the time, but I also think it’s a precious moment for my daughter and me since this kind of things occur only when a child is young enough. I don’t think this will not occur when she grows up. Kids are adorable after all!
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My daughter is seeing a human face on the ceiling…
From a couple of days ago, my 9 years old daughter sees a human face on the ceiling when she goes to bed. She says the pattern of the wallpaper on the ceiling looks like a human face and the eyes scare her the most. So since then I had been sitting beside her on her bed till she fell fallsasleep. It’s a little bid bit annoying because I cannot do things I could do during this time, but I also think it’s a precious moment for my daughter and me since this kind of thing only occurs only when a child is young enough. I don’t think this will not occur when she grows up. Kids are adorable after all!NOTES:
...when a child is young enough --> 'enough' is not needed in this sentence. The meaning is clearer without this word
I don't think this will not occur... --> you already have 'do not/ don't' in the sentence, using 'not occur' is not needed. The meaning is already clear. You are already stating = I don't think + something will occur. We already know that you do not think something is possible, 'not occur' confuses readers as what is something that will "not not occur"?
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Hi Aki, I think changing the ceiling into pure white paint without patterns is your priority. Kid ain't sleep well with strange pattern in low light condition.
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Hi Binch, Thanks for your comment! Could you tell me what you mean by “angles” ?
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My daughter is seeing a human face on the ceiling…
From A couple of days ago, my 9-year-old daughter sees saw a human face on the ceiling when she goes went to bed. She says said that the pattern of wallpaper on the ceiling looked like a human face, and the eyes scared her the most. So since then, I had been sitting beside her on by her bed until she fell asleep. It’s a little bid bit annoying because I cannot couldn't do things I could do during the time, but I also think thought that it’s a precious moment for my daughter and me I since this these kind of things occur only only occur when a child is young enough. I don’t think this will not occur happen when she grows up. Kids are adorable, after all!0
I think you should change the wallpaper to angles , then tell your daughter that: Angles will protect you. Good night, sleep tight baby!
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