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MADRID CENTRAL “Madrid Central “, is a qualitative change to the city of Madrid. The prohibition of vehicles that run with diesel engines in a big delimited area in the center of the town, is a key milestone in the fight against environmental pollution. In the long term, everything is an advantage. It will be less pollution. Probably there will be fewer cars on the streets and as a result of that fewer illness produced by carbon dioxide. Therefore, Madrid and shortly other towns in Spain will be ozone-friendly and will increase awareness and appreciation of the environment, making people think about the greenhouse effect and global warming. There will be less acoustic pollution and more space for pedestrians, consequently, we`ll have lively streets where people will be able to go for a walk, ride bikes and do sports. we definitively will come back to a more social town where people interact more, what is truly positive for people in order to have more relationships and less violence. There will be fewer people alone and happier. But this huge project has to be well planned and, in my opinion, it hasn´t. It seems to be supported by people because at last we ever have to waste a lot of many in order to carry out the project in which we have not even invited. Politicians have to meet and reach agreements that establish strong plans for the future with no possibility of return. They have to take in account to local and national institutions and citizens, be valiant and “invite” automobile industries to make little cheap electric cars for people who live in the outskirts, as other countries have done. In this way, the government of Madrid has not given time people to manage this huge change, and we have to spend a lot of many to buy or change our cars. They haven`t increased the public transport, doing it more accessible, and they never planned on time the “deterrents parking”, something essential to carry out this project. On the whole, the project won´t stop, it will be successful because of the people of Madrid. Their effort is the main contribution and the principal strength of it. One thing is the idea, which is easy to think, but the implementation is ours, the difficult part falls on our shoulders.

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MADRID CENTRAL

“Madrid Central “, is a qualitative change to the city of Madrid. The prohibition of vehicles that run with diesel engines in a big delimited area in the center of the town is a key milestone in the fight against environmental pollution.
In the long term, everything is an advantage. There will be less pollution.* Probably there will be fewer cars on the streets and as a result of that fewer illness produced by carbon dioxide. Therefore, Madrid and shortly other towns in Spain will be ozone-friendly and will have increased awareness and appreciation of the environment, making people think about the greenhouse effect and global warming.
There will be less acoustic pollution and more space for pedestrians, consequently we`ll have lively streets where people will be able to go for a walk, ride bikes and do sports. We definitively will come back to a more social town where people interact more, which is truly positive for people in order to have more relationships and less violence. There will be fewer lonely people and they will be happier.**
But this huge project has to be well planned and, in my opinion, it hasn´t been.*** It seems to be supported by people because at last we ever**** have to waste a lot of many in order to carry out the project in which we have not even invited. Politicians have to meet and reach agreements that establish strong plans for the future with no possibility of return. They have to take into account local and national institutions and citizens and be valiant and “invite” automobile industries to make little cheap electric cars for people who live in the outskirts, as other countries have done. In this way, the government of Madrid has not given time for people to manage this huge change, and we have to spend a lot of money to buy or change our cars. They haven`t increased the public transport, making it more accessible, and they never planned in time the “deterrents parking”, something essential to carry out this project.
On the whole, the project won´t stop, it will be successful because of the people of Madrid. Their effort is the main contribution and the principal strength of it. One thing is the idea, which is easy to think, but the implementation is ours, the difficult part falls on our shoulders.

[* Or: "It will be less polluted."

** Your original text says there will be fewer lonely people and fewer happy people.

*** Or: "it wasn't."

**** Perhaps you meant "even"? The word "ever" doesn't make sense to me here.]

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