Preparation for IELTS writing examination. Please correct grammar mistake and tell me if you have any advise about my short essay! Thank you in advance :) Question: The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the beat way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree? My answer: To cope with the health issue related to the growing population of overweight people, some people argue that school should provide more physical education lectures. I partly agree this opinion because this idea can work, but there is another thing we can do to deal with this problem. That is, school also should teach about good eating habit. First of all, giving children more opportunities to do workout no doubt contributes to make healthy body. These days, a lot of students are likely to stay inside and play video games instead of going out after the school. Thus, providing physical education lessons helps students to cover the lack of physical exercises. Secondly, lecture on healthy eating habit can be help to reduce the number of overweight people. In modern society, it is easy for children to access the junk foods. The fast food restaurants are everywhere on streets, and there is a vast array of cheap snacks on a shelf in the supermarkets. These foods usually lack nutritious, include a lot of fat. In conclusion, increasing the number of physical education lectures is not enough to deal with the health issue. It is necessarily that people have the appropriate knowledge of healthy diet, and combining both of them, we can tackle this issue more efficiently.