How about Pink Floyd?
I was about 12 when I first heard their music and was shocked once and for all. I still consider this band one of the best classical rock music band ever. Every listening is like a cool trip among clouds, or walking through the night urban smog. You could get high just listening one of the many guitar solo(for example, solo from the song «Shine On You Crazy Diamond»)! It's not a joke, I'm serious! Their music will make you happy, crazy, sad, depressed, but it never remains you indifferent. «The Dark Side Of The Moon», «Wish You Were Here» and «The Wall» are my favorite albums, that I usually like to listen. Also, that is great to re-watch «The Wall» movie, it makes me worry and depressed, and yet I still enjoy it. This one of the cool films I really like.
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How about Pink Floyd?
I was about 12 when I first heard their music and it blew my mind once and for all. I still consider Pink Floyd one of the best classic rock music bands ever. Every time I hear them, it's like a cool trip among clouds, or walking through the night urban smog at night. You can get high just listening to one of the many guitar solos (for example, the solo from the song Shine On You Crazy Diamond)! No joke - I'm serious! Their music will make you happy, crazy, sad, depressed, but it never leaves you indifferent. The Dark Side Of The Moon, Wish You Were Here and The Wall are my favorite albums, that I usually like to listen to. It's also great to re-watch the movie The Wall - it worries and depresses me, and yet I still enjoy it. This one of the cool films I really like.____________________________________
All in all, not bad. You seem to express yourself quite well and have a good vocabulary. I provided some grammatical corrections in green, and some idiomatic/stylistic suggestions in yellow. Please let me know if you have any questions. Also pay attention to the following: (1) When you use the pattern ONE OF THE, you have to use a plural noun: one of the most difficult languageS, one of the rainiest dayS... (2) The verb LISTEN always takes the complement TO. Happy New Year!
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How about Pink Floyd?
I was about 12 when I first heard their music and was shocked once and for all. I still consider this band one of the best classical rock music bands ever. Every listening time I listen to them ("listening" can be used as a noun as you did, but it is quite an unusual usage - more typical might be something like "Every time I hear one of their tracks ...") is like a cool trip among clouds, or walking through the urban smog at night. You could get high just listening one of the many guitar solo(for example, solo from the song «Shine On You Crazy Diamond»)! It's not a joke, I'm serious! Their music will make you happy, crazy, sad, depressed, but it never leaves you indifferent. «The Dark Side Of The Moon», «Wish You Were Here» and «The Wall» are my favorite albums, that I usually like to listen to. Also, it is great to re-watch «The Wall» movie. It makes me worried (this probably wants to match with "depressed" for tense) and depressed, and yet I still enjoy it. This one of the cool films I really like.yes - and such a varied output :)
https://youtu.be/3j8mr-gcgoI
https://youtu.be/5R8EpAv4miA
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