experience getting bad mood yesterday
Yesterday I went through racism at the mart. Because I went to the mart for shopping and I tried to pay stuff on self machine. Then a mart worker came to me and said like “I’d like to check your bag” and I showed her my bag. But she never checked other people like Australian. She made me freak out and I felt like telling her fucking racism. I am okay that she check my bag. Really I am sure. But I think it’s unfair. She had to check all people’s bag so as to do that to me. Thanks for her, I was in bad mood all day.
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Experience of me getting in a bad mood yesterday.
Yesterday I went through racism at the mart. Because I went to the mart to do some shopping and I tried to pay by self machine. Then a mart worker came to me and said “I’d like to check your bag” and I showed her my bag. But she never checked other people's bags who come from Australia. She freaked me out and I thought about telling her that it's fucking racist. I am okay that she checked my bag. Really I am okay. But I think it’s unfair. If she checked my bag, then she should of done it to other people too. Thanks to her, I was in bad mood all day long.
This text is understandable! Well done, but we had some problems with using correct vocabulary, which isn't a problem because you're trying! Well done! :)
The bit in blue had to be restructured. You get the general meaning of it , but it isn't grammatically correct. You need to work on sentence structures, but overall I am impressed! Keep going! :)
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Experience that gave me a bad mood yesterday...
Yesterday I experienced racism at the mart (I would use the word shop instead of mart because I am Australian but if you are in America mart is more appropriate).Because I went to the mart to do my shopping and I (you don't need to say I again) tried to pay for stuff at the self-service checkout. Then a mart worker (haha, this is a funny way of saying shop assistant) came to me and said, like “I’d like to check your bag” so I showed her my bag. But she never checked other people such as Australians. She made me freak out and I felt like telling her 'fucking racist'. I am okay that she checked my bag. Really I am sure. But I think it’s unfair. She had to check other people’s bag so as to do that to me. Thanks to her, I was in a bad mood all day.
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