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my life Hi. My name is gim gigeon. Nice to meet you. I live in korea in Busan. I am thirteen years old. I am a young guy. My favorite movie is horror movie. I like horror mivie because it is fun. If you watching horror movie you willbe scared. Me too. Do like chickin and pizza? which do you like batter. I like chickin. This is expensive the pizza, but it is very delicious. My familly is very nice. grandpa, grandma, brother and sister. Grandpa is a taxi driver. My granma is nurse. She is very kind. but she shout me.my brother and sister are very bad. She fight me every day. he cry this noise. However, we are familly. I read books every day. I read comic book. comic book is very fun. I go to library at the school. I want be a actor because I want a lot of money. It is my dream. I have many friend. Friends are no English well, but they are very kind and nice.If you have good friend you are a lucky guy.

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Hi. My name is Gim Gigeon. Nice to meet you. I live in Korea in Busan. I am thirteen years old. I am a young guy. My favorite type of movie is horror. I like horror movies because they are fun. If you're watching a horror movie you will be scared. Me too. Do you like chicken and pizza? Which one do you like better? I like chicken. Pizza is expensive, but it is very delicious. My familly is very nice. Grandpa, grandma, brother and sister. Grandpa is a taxi driver. My granma is a nurse. She is very kind. But she shouts at me. My brother and sister are very bad. She fights with me every day. He cries noisily. However, we are a family. I read books every day. I read comic book. Comic book is very fun. I go to the library at school. I want be an actor because I want to make a lot of money. It is my dream. I have many friends. My friends are not good in English, but they are very kind and nice. If you have good friends you are a lucky guy.
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My life

Hi, my name is gim gigeon. Nice to meet you. I live in korea in Busan. I am thirteen years old, a young guy. My favorite kind of movies (or film genre) is horror. I like horror movies because it is fun. If you watching horror movie you will be scared. Me too. Do like chicken and pizza? which one do you like better? (I think you can change it to "Wich one do you prefer?") I like chicken. This is expensive the pizza is expensive, but it is very delicious. My familly is very nice, my grandpa, grandma, brother and sister. My Grandpa is a taxi driver and granma is a nurse. She is very kind, but she shout me. My brother and sister are very mean to me. She fights me every day. he cries very noise. However, we are familly. I read books every day and read comic books. Comic book is very fun. I go to library in the school. I want be a actor because I want a lot of money. It is my dream. I have many friends. MyFriends are no don't know English well, but they are very kind and nice. If you have good friends you are a lucky guy.


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