Corrections · 5
Good news--happy /unhappy ending
I am waiting for my good news.
Actually I really hate the feeling of waiting for sth.
Because I always worry about the ending is happy or unhappy?
Actually I hope I will get the happy ending.
Sometimes if I rearly want to get sth, at last I always fail.
Conversely, if I don't care the ending is good or not, I will get the good news.
Do you think so ? Do you agree with me?
CORRECTION:
I am waiting for my good news. -> I am expecting a good news.
· 1st Actually, I really hate the feeling of waiting for something . 2nd Because I always worry about the ending is happy or unhappy? – You need to combine the 2 sentences because the 2nd part can not considered as a sentence, the thought is not complete.
-> Actually, I really hate the feeling of waiting for something, because I always worry whether the ending will be happy or sad.
Actually I hope I will get the happy ending. -> Actually I hope it will be a happy ending.
Sometimes if I rearly want to get sth,(something is missing, like what you did to get what you want) at last I always fail. -> Sometimes, if I really wanted to get something, (I find ways to get what I want) but in the end I always fail.
Conversely, if I don't care the ending is good or not, I will get the good news.
It`s so ironic. If I don`t care whether the ending is good or not, I will get the good news.
Do you think so? -> (I think it`s better to say) What do you think?
Do you agree with me?
(YES, I agree with you because it happens to me also.)
Good news--happy /unhappy ending
I am waiting for my good news.
Actually I really hate the feeling of waiting for sth.
Because I always worry about the ending is happy or unhappy?
Actually I hope I will get the happy ending.
Sometimes if I rearly want to get sth, at last I always fail.
Conversely, if I don't care the ending is good or not, I will get the good news.
Do you think so ? Do you agree with me?
CORRECTION:
I am waiting for my good news. -> I am expecting a good news.
· 1st Actually, I really hate the feeling of waiting for something . 2nd Because I always worry about the ending is happy or unhappy? – You need to combine the 2 sentences because the 2nd part can not considered as a sentence, the thought is not complete.
-> Actually, I really hate the feeling of waiting for something, because I always worry whether the ending will be happy or sad.
Actually I hope I will get the happy ending. -> Actually I hope it will be a happy ending.
Sometimes if I rearly want to get sth,(something is missing, like what you did to get what you want) at last I always fail. -> Sometimes, if I really wanted to get something, (I find ways to get what I want) but in the end I always fail.
Conversely, if I don't care the ending is good or not, I will get the good news.
It`s so ironic. If I don`t care whether the ending is good or not, I will get the good news.
Do you think so? -> (I think it`s better to say) What do you think?
Do you agree with me?
(YES, I agree with you because it happens to me also.)
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