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Good news--happy /unhappy ending I am waiting for my good news. Actually I really hate the feeling of waiting for sth. Because I always worry about the ending is happy or unhappy? Actually I hope I will get the happy ending. Sometimes if I rearly want to get sth, at last I always fail. Conversely, if I don't care the ending is good or not, I will get the good news. Do you think so ? Do you agree with me?

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Good news--happy /unhappy ending

I am waiting for my good news.
Actually I really hate the feeling of waiting for sth.
Because I always worry about the ending is happy or unhappy?
Actually I hope I will get the happy ending.
Sometimes if I rearly want to get sth, at last I always fail.
Conversely, if I don't care the ending is good or not, I will get the good news.
Do you think so ? Do you agree with me?

 

CORRECTION:

I am waiting for my good news. ->   I am expecting a good news.  

·          1st Actually, I really hate the feeling of waiting for something . 2nd Because I always worry about the ending is happy or unhappy? – You need to combine the 2 sentences because the 2nd part can not considered as a sentence, the thought is not complete.

-> Actually, I really hate the feeling of waiting for something, because I always worry whether the ending will be happy or sad.

Actually I hope I will get the happy ending. -> Actually I hope it will be a happy ending.

Sometimes if I rearly want to get sth,(something is missing, like what you did to get what you want) at last I always fail. -> Sometimes, if I really wanted to get something, (I find ways to get what I want) but in the end I always fail.

Conversely, if I don't care the ending is good or not, I will get the good news. 

It`s so ironic.  If I don`t care whether the ending is good or not, I will get the good news.

Do you think so?  ->  (I think it`s better to say)  What do you think?

Do you agree with me?

(YES, I agree with you because it happens to me also.)

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Good news--happy /unhappy ending

I am waiting for my good news.
Actually I really hate the feeling of waiting for sth.
Because I always worry about the ending is happy or unhappy?
Actually I hope I will get the happy ending.
Sometimes if I rearly want to get sth, at last I always fail.
Conversely, if I don't care the ending is good or not, I will get the good news.
Do you think so ? Do you agree with me?

 

CORRECTION:

I am waiting for my good news. ->   I am expecting a good news.  

·          1st Actually, I really hate the feeling of waiting for something . 2nd Because I always worry about the ending is happy or unhappy? – You need to combine the 2 sentences because the 2nd part can not considered as a sentence, the thought is not complete.

-> Actually, I really hate the feeling of waiting for something, because I always worry whether the ending will be happy or sad.

Actually I hope I will get the happy ending. -> Actually I hope it will be a happy ending.

Sometimes if I rearly want to get sth,(something is missing, like what you did to get what you want) at last I always fail. -> Sometimes, if I really wanted to get something, (I find ways to get what I want) but in the end I always fail.

Conversely, if I don't care the ending is good or not, I will get the good news. 

It`s so ironic.  If I don`t care whether the ending is good or not, I will get the good news.

Do you think so?  ->  (I think it`s better to say)  What do you think?

Do you agree with me?

(YES, I agree with you because it happens to me also.)

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yeah, it's my bother...
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I know, it's called "the agony of waiting". :)

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