Nightmare

Today, I'm taking u into sharing a nightmare of me mine. It's It was rainning raining really hard and accompanied along with thunder last night. For a girl. it's scaring this is scary. So, since it's hard to get to sleep under that circumstance, I decided to read some news on the internet while chatting on skype to distract attention myself...but I fell asleep at last coz because it's I was really tired after working all day. That's where when the nightmare began. Someone broke into my room in the dream, and I was running, and escaped to escape until came to a safe place. However, it's not the end, bad things came one after another; I thought I had missed an important exam which is really critical to my career and I felt really sad. I just kept crying and could not stop. When I wake up at 5:00 in the morning, I thought I was still cryint crying though actually I didn't....
It's It was a tired tiresome night~

(PS:It‘s difficult to write an article in english)

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Very good details! Try to avoid saying "It's" when you mean "It was" - "It's" is informal and usually means "It is." Keep up the good work.