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Conjunctions I would like to put two sentences (①and②) together by using conjunctions. Please help me. ①The lesson is tomorrow, so I tried to do the home work which you gave to me by URL. ②The URL did not work, so I cannot finish my home work.

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Conjunctions

I would like to put two sentences (①and②) together by using conjunctions. Please help me.

①The lesson is tomorrow, so I tried to do the home work which you gave to me by URL.
②The URL did not work, so I cannot finish my home work.


The lesson is tomorrow, so I tried to do the homework which you gave to me by URL   However, the URL did not work, so I cannot finish my homework.


Personally, I would say:

I tried to do the online homework you gave me for tomorrow, but the link didn't work.

Basically, it simplifies the sentences, and uses 'but' as a conjunction.  'Homework which you gave me by URL' is (maybe) possible in English, but 'online homework' is a more common and shorter  expression.  Also, if the URL doesn't work (the 'link' doesn't work), a native speaker wouldn't need to say the last part "so I cannot finish my homework" at the end of the conversation. 

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I would like to put two sentences (①and②) together by using conjunctions. Please help me.

①The lesson is tomorrow, so I tried to do the homework which you gave to (the correct way is always: gave me. Although it is grammatically correct, you just sound natural when you say 'gave me') me by URL.
②The URL did not work, so I cannot finish my homework.

However can be a good option for gathering these two sentences. Let me show you how:
The lesson is tomorrow, so I tried to do the homework which you gave me by URL, however  the URL did not work, so I can't finish my homework. 

Hope I've helped you.
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The lesson is tomorrow, so I tried to do the home work which you gave to me by URL, but the URL did not work, so I cannot finish my home work. The lesson is tomorrow, so I tried to do the home work which you gave to me by URL. However, the URL did not work, so I cannot finish my home work.

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