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plz correct my essay Topic:Agree or disagree: the Japanese government should do more to protect the environment(120-150words)

I agree with the statement that the Japanese government should do more to protect the environment. Although advance in the technology made our life more confortable and convenient, it also occur the problem. I have two ideas on it.

First, they should encourage to use natural resources such as solar power.No limit to use them.In other words,we can use for a long term and save money as well.

The other is that they should support the public transportation instead of a car can less congestion as well as pollution.

In conclusion,we have faced to the environmental issue for decades. Nevertheless,it's more serious.The government is called for solutions to improve it.

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plz correct my essay

Topic:Agree or disagree: the Japanese government should do more to protect the environment(120-150words)

I agree with the statement that the Japanese government should do more to protect the environment. Although the advance in technology made our lives more comfortable and convenient, problems still occur. I have two solutions for this.

First, they should encourage using natural resources such as solar power. There is no limit to them. In other words, we can use them long term and save money as well.

The other solution is that they should support public transportation. There would be less congestion as well as pollution.

In conclusion, we have been facing an environmental issue for decades and the problem continues to worsen. The government must find solutions to improve the situation.

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