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My daughter's review The London Eye. When I first saw the London Eye, I couldn’t believe my eyes. It is the biggest wheel in the world. You can take a 30 minute flight on the London Eye and enjoy the astonishing view. You can also study the engineering of this amazing structure. I was fascinated by the flight. The day was very clear. There weren’t any clouds in the sky at all. That is why I could see 40 km across England. London buildings and bridges looked very small from 135 meters above the ground. What I didn’t like about the London Eye is that there was a huge queue to the ticket office, and there were also a lot of people in the pod. So, I have got two tips for other visitors: 1) It is better to visit it early in the morning to avoid queues. 2) Choose a sunny and clear day for your visit to enjoy the view.

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Only 2 comments: It's very hard to know when London (or anywhere in UK) will have good weather! Also we spell the metric unit of length "metres'. "meters" are instruments for measuring electricity, gas, water etc.,
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My daughter's review  / well done :)

The London Eye.

When I first saw the London Eye, I couldn’t believe my eyes. It is the biggest wheel in the world. You can take a 30 minute flight on the London Eye and enjoy the astonishing view. You can also study the engineering of this amazing structure.

I was fascinated by the flight. The day was very clear. There weren’t any clouds in the sky at all. That is why I could see 40 km across England. London buildings and bridges looked very small from 135 meters above the ground.

What I didn’t like about the London Eye is that there was a huge queue to the ticket office (we might say "for the ticket office" here), and there were also a lot of people in the pod.

So, I have got two tips for other visitors:
1) It is better to visit it early in the morning to avoid queues.
2) Choose a sunny and clear day for your visit to enjoy the view.

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