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or-->but was just playing with his smartphone
or-->but was just on his phone
Not one, but several men, were doing the same. I wondered why they were using their smartphones instead of shopping. Although, looking at them carefully, I realized that they all came with their partners. The women stood next to those men were choosing the items seriously.
^This phrase makes sense but sounds odd. Use a word like actual, or rephrase to emphasise THEY were shopping.
-The women stood next to these men were doing the actual shopping.
-The women stood next to these men were the ones doing the shopping.
The men were bored with shopping
or-->bored of shopping (sounds more natural)
and were on their phones to kill time. I felt it was not too long ago that I often saw a man standing next to a woman, waiting with a tired look, saying "Hey, have you decided? Either one is fine!", but the time has changed!
or-->but the times have changed (sounds more natural)
or-->but how the times have changed! (This is a common phrase)
I was impressed to find that.
or-->I was impressed to discover this. (Better word choice)
Although it seems that women spending a lot of time shopping has not changed. How about in your country?
You have a very good grasp of English, and the story made me laugh. As a guy, I think it's much better nowadays with smarthphones :).
In the UK, "smartphone" is not often used, and sounds unnatural if repeated a lot, so we just say "He's on his phone" or "He's using his phone".
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