First day of the vacation
First day of the vacation.
Today is the first day of the my vacation, I was dreaming of the arrival of this day because this year was very tiring.
There was a lot of hard test in college, and a lot of things to do at work.
The time was short for so things.
I'm happy to be on vacation.
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First day of the vacation
First day of the vacation.Today is the first day of the my vacation, I was have been dreaming of the arrival of this day because this year was very tiring.
There was a lot of hard tests in college, and a lot of things to do at work.
The time was short for so many things.
I'm happy to be on vacation.
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"I was dreaming" sounds like you stopped wanting vacation to happen, the way you used it. So it is better to say "I have been" to show that you have been expecting or excited for it for a noticeable amount of time. "of the arrival" also sounded a little too wordy, dreaming of this day means the same thing and is more accurate to typical English.
One thing I hate about English is there's no ground rule on when a word should be plural or not, but here "tests" is needed since you are talking about "a lot". This doesn't apply 100% of the time and, like I said, there's no rule to really tell you when to and not use it.
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First day of the vacation
First day of the vacation.Today is the first day of the my vacation, I was dreaming of the arrival of this day because this year was very tiring.
There was a lot of hard tests in college, and a lot of things to do at work.
The time was short for so things --> (or: There was not a lot of time to do things)
I'm happy to be on vacation.
Enjoy your vacation!!
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