France me ek kranti hai!
Sabhi ko namaste!
mai aaj ke france ke kranti ke bare me bolne wala hun! Vastaav ven, panch hafton se, bahut log sadkon pe danga karte hain! Kyon? Log ub gaye ki sarkar kuch nahi kar hai. Sabhi kehete hai "Bas!". Shuru me, sarkare ne faisla kiya ki oil ka dam badhega. Bahut samey se, sarkake logon se zyada pesa leta hai. Mujhe pese dena koi farak nahi hai agar bad me zyada hospital ya train hain, agar svasth ke liye karchai kum ho jate hain... Par, rajnitigy ne hamko dhoka diya! unka pehla faisla tha ki amiron ko kuch mahasool nahi hoga! Isliye, jab bad me wo log garibon ko pesa lete hain tab sabhi nahi samjate hain. Is baar, kafi alag hai kyonki jawan, bure, karmachare dono danga karte hai. Kabhi kabhi hinsak ho sakte hai, kyonki yeh ek akhri hi hal tha, kyonki hamara rashtrapati ne hamko pehle nahi sunaya. Usko logon ke bare me dyan nahi aata hai, wo company, safal utpadal aur france ka karz bas hamesha sochta hai. Pichli hafte, jese sab kuch bahut kharab ho gaya, usne faisla kiya ki garibon ko zyada pesa milega. Kum se kum hamari kranti kuch paranam dekhata hai.
Today I am going to talk about Today's french revolution! Indeed, since five weeks, lots of people riots in the streets. Why? people got fed up that the government does nothing. Everybody says "enough!". At the beginning, the government decided that oil prices would increase. Since a long time, governement takes too much money. I don't mind giving money if there are more hospitals, trains or that health costs reduce. However, politicians betrayed us. Their first decision was that for rich people there will be no taxes. COnsequently, when after these people take money from the poor, everybone can't understand. This time, young, old and workers together took riot. Sometimes they can be violent, because it was the only final solution, as our president didn't listen to us. He doesn't care about people. He just think about the companies, the effective production and the debt. Last week, as everything got really bad, he decided that poor people will get more money. At least our revolution shows some results.
I know it's long and boring, but thanks you for helping with the mistakes :)
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Sabhi ko namaste!
mai aaj ke france ki kranti ke bare me bolne wala hun! Vastaav me, panch hafton se, bahut log sadkon pe danga karte rahe hain! Kyon? Log ub gaye ki sarkar kuch nahi kar hai. Sabhi kehete hai "Bas!". Shuru me, sarkare ne faisla kiya ki teel ka dam badhega. Bahut samey se, sarkar logon se zyada pese leta hai. Mujhe pese dene me koi farak nahi pdta hai agar bad me zyada hospital ya train hain, agar svasth ke liye kharcha kum ho jate hain... Par, rajnitigy ne hamko dhoka diya! unka pehla faisla tha ki amiron ko kuch mahasool ( que voulez vous dire ici) nahi hoga! Isliye, jab bad me wo log garibon se pesa lete hain tab sabhi nahi samjate hain ( je ne comprends pas) Is baar, kafi alag hai kyonki jawan, bure, but karamchari dono danga karte hai. Kabhi kabhi hinsak ho sakte hai, kyonki yeh ek akhri hi hal tha, kyonki hamare rashtrapati ne hamko pehle nahi sunaya. Usko logon ke bare me dyan nahi aata hai, wo company, safal utpadal (??) aur bas france ke karz ke bare me hamesha sochta hai. Pichle hafte, jese sab kuch bahut kharab ho gaya, usne faisla kiya ki garibon ko zyada pesa milega. Kum se kum hamari kranti kuch paranam dekha rahi hai.
Today I am going to talk about Today's french revolution! Indeed, since five weeks, lots of people riots in the streets. Why? people got fed up that the government does nothing. Everybody says "enough!". At the beginning, the government decided that oil prices would increase. Since a long time, governement takes too much money. I don't mind giving money if there are more hospitals, trains or that health costs reduce. However, politicians betrayed us. Their first decision was that for rich people there will be no taxes. COnsequently, when after these people take money from the poor, everybone can't understand. This time, young, old and workers together took riot. Sometimes they can be violent, because it was the only final solution, as our president didn't listen to us. He doesn't care about people. He just think about the companies, the effective production and the debt. Last week, as everything got really bad, he decided that poor people will get more money. At least our revolution shows some results.
I know it's long and boring, but thanks you for helping with the mistakes :)
# bravo mon ami
# keep writing 😊
mai aaj ke france ki kranti ke bare me bolne wala hun! Vastaav me, panch hafton se, bahut log sadkon pe danga karte rahe hain! Kyon? Log ub gaye ki sarkar kuch nahi kar hai. Sabhi kehete hai "Bas!". Shuru me, sarkare ne faisla kiya ki teel ka dam badhega. Bahut samey se, sarkar logon se zyada pese leta hai. Mujhe pese dene me koi farak nahi pdta hai agar bad me zyada hospital ya train hain, agar svasth ke liye kharcha kum ho jate hain... Par, rajnitigy ne hamko dhoka diya! unka pehla faisla tha ki amiron ko kuch mahasool ( que voulez vous dire ici) nahi hoga! Isliye, jab bad me wo log garibon se pesa lete hain tab sabhi nahi samjate hain ( je ne comprends pas) Is baar, kafi alag hai kyonki jawan, bure, but karamchari dono danga karte hai. Kabhi kabhi hinsak ho sakte hai, kyonki yeh ek akhri hi hal tha, kyonki hamare rashtrapati ne hamko pehle nahi sunaya. Usko logon ke bare me dyan nahi aata hai, wo company, safal utpadal (??) aur bas france ke karz ke bare me hamesha sochta hai. Pichle hafte, jese sab kuch bahut kharab ho gaya, usne faisla kiya ki garibon ko zyada pesa milega. Kum se kum hamari kranti kuch paranam dekha rahi hai.
Today I am going to talk about Today's french revolution! Indeed, since five weeks, lots of people riots in the streets. Why? people got fed up that the government does nothing. Everybody says "enough!". At the beginning, the government decided that oil prices would increase. Since a long time, governement takes too much money. I don't mind giving money if there are more hospitals, trains or that health costs reduce. However, politicians betrayed us. Their first decision was that for rich people there will be no taxes. COnsequently, when after these people take money from the poor, everybone can't understand. This time, young, old and workers together took riot. Sometimes they can be violent, because it was the only final solution, as our president didn't listen to us. He doesn't care about people. He just think about the companies, the effective production and the debt. Last week, as everything got really bad, he decided that poor people will get more money. At least our revolution shows some results.
I know it's long and boring, but thanks you for helping with the mistakes :)
# bravo mon ami
# keep writing 😊
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