a funny diary
Yesterday was a relaxing day, you know why? Sen came my home at 10.30 and brought me a big breakfast including two steamed pork dumplings, two steamed buns with brown sugar taste and two cups of latte. Sen proudly told me that he paid for his coffee and successfully got a free one for me thanks to the sales promotion activity held by Family Mart. Honestly speaking, I don’s know where his pride came from.
After having breakfast, we began to recite GRE words, but unfortunately, both of us have a bad memory and therefore we only finished half of our original study plan- 50 words in total. In my opinion, it is his fault that pulls back my study momentum because he always disturbed me deliberately.
Everybody knows the difficulty of comforting a noisy child, to quiet him down we went out for dinner. Sen ordered three dished for me and they are stir-fried slice pork, bitter gourd with scramble eggs and a cold dished made by beef, celery and red grape. I enjoyed this meal very much since Sen treat me the meal and I am still surprised by his unnatural behavior.
After that I just came back home.
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A Funny Diary Entry
Yesterday was a relaxing day, you know why? Sen came to my house at 10.30 and brought me a big breakfast including two steamed pork dumplings, two brown sugar flavoured steamed buns and two cups of latte. Sen proudly told me that he paid for his coffee and successfully got a free one for me thanks to a deal going on at Family Mart. Honestly, I don’t know where his pride came from.After having breakfast, we began to recite GRE words, but unfortunately, both of us have a bad memory and therefore we only finished half of our original study plan- 50 words in total. In my opinion, it's his fault that I lose my momentum when I'm studying as he always deliberately disrupts me. (this sounds a little bit weird in English but if you definitely wanna say "momentum" and "his fault", this is the best way I can think of.)
Everybody knows how difficult it is to get a noisy child to calm down, so to quiet him down we went out for dinner. Sen ordered three dishes for me which were (you need to maintain the past tense here) stir-fried sliced pork, bitter gourd with scrambled eggs and a cold dish made of beef, celery and red grape. I enjoyed this meal very much since Sen treated me to the meal and I am still surprised by his unnatural - what do you mean by "unnatural"? Do you mean more like "unexpected"?- behaviour.
After that I just went home.
It's really good, it's just important to remember that in English when you start describing a situation in the past, e.g. "we went to a restaurant", the rest of the situation must be described in the past tense. e.g. "we went to a restaurant and ate (not eat) beef."
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