Hey!! You took my name! hehehe

I agree with the person above. Your English is good.

There's one thing that I will add -- your grammar is correct, but the grammar that you're using is more textbook than the kind of grammar that we usually use in regular speech.

Here's how your entry would sound in everyday speech:

"My (English) name is Anita. I am from China. I am a college student. I like swimming and dancing. I want to improve my (ability to speak) English because my major is English. "

加油！！ :)

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My English name is Anita. I come from China. I am a college student . I like swimming and dancing. I want to improve imporve my English ability, because my major is English.

You are very good already :)