First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is Lin Jieqiong,I am a grade two student in University.The reasons why do i learn English, to begin with,my first major is pre-sschool edcation,to learn English well make it much easier o find a desire job.Secondly,i am really interested in learing English in that I think it can broaden my vision and horizon by learning about the countries as well as cultures and lifestlies of people, at the same time,it's enjoyable to speak English fluently,especiallycommunicate with native English speakers and I believe if making persistent efforts, I can learn English well in near future.

My name is Lin Jieqiong,I am a grade two student in University. -> I am a second year university student OR a sophomore university student.

The reasons why do i learn English, to begin with, -> To begin with the reasons why I am learning English is because

 my first major is pre-sschool edcation,to learn English well make it much easier o find a desire job –>  first, my major is preschool education( Early childhood education) and I think learning English will help me find my desired job.

Secondly,i am really interested in learing English in that I think it can broaden my vision and horizon by learning about the countries as well as cultures and lifestlies of people -> Second, I am really interested in learning English because I think it can broaden my vision and widen my horizon, by learning different countries, its culture, lifestyle as well as the people.

at the same time,it's enjoyable to speak English fluently,especiallycommunicate with native English speakers and I believe if making persistent efforts, I can learn English well in near future. -> at the same time, it`s enjoyable to speak English fluently, especially if you can communicate with native English speakers. I also believe that if I am persistent in exerting effort, I will learn English soon.