Phones Developing countries reported a substantial increase in the use of mobile phones in the past decade. Back then, landline phones were inaccessible for more than 95% of the population, so that mo

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Phones Developing countries reported a substantial increase in the use of mobile phones in the past decade. Back then, landline phones were inaccessible for more than 95% of the population, so that mobile phones were the devices that made telecommunications available to thousands of people. The development of mobile communication has had both positive and negative effects. Firstly, mobile phones enable to access information and services on the internet. According to experts, it was this innovation that permitted to receive alerts with financial information and trade securities in 2000s. Moreover, it represents a means to keep in touch with friends and relatives. On the other hand, there are also some problems, namely the cost that is often a burden for poor families which may decide to decrease the expenditure on basic needs to afford these devices. Overall, mobile phones represent an innovation with many positive impacts, so that it is important to recognize the limitations to ensure a proper usage and limit the negative impacts.

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Developing countries have reported a substantial increase in the use of mobile phones in/over/during the past decade. [Back]/Before then, landline phones were inaccessible for/to more than 95% of the population, so that mobile phones were the devices that made telecommunications available to thousands of people. The development of mobile communication has had both positive and negative effects.
Firstly, mobile phones enable [to] access to information and services on the internet. According to experts, it was this innovation that permitted individuals to receive alerts with financial information, and to trade securities in the 2000s. Moreover, it represents a means to keep in touch with friends and relatives.
On the other hand, there are also some problems, namely the cost that is often a burden for poor families which may decide to decrease their expenditure on basic needs to afford these devices.
Overall, mobile phones represent an innovation with many benefits//positive [impacts]/consequences/outcomes/effects, so that it is important to recognize their limitations to ensure a proper usage and limit the negative impacts.

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