my IELTS exercise
topic:some people think watching TV is bad for children,while others think that watching tv has more beneficial effects on children, discuss both side and give your own opinion.
Nowadays an increasing number of people are concerned about the influence of watching TV to kids. However, whether watching TV could bring beneficial effects to childrens is a controversial issue. My view is that watching TV have more negative effects than good influence on kids.
First, it is obvious that watching TV will let childrens pay more attention on screen instead of their study, this is because there are so many interesting contents in TV which attract childrens eyes all the times, for kids, their are easy to be addicted to the TV show, so watching TV have a lot of bad effects for Children’s study.
Moreover, the childrens, they are short of ability to distinguish right from wrong, they may imitate some dangerous actions even criminal behavior from TV. For instance, there was a news last year in China, some kids play in countryside, and they burn on of them by fire, just to mimic a plot of a cartoon.
That is not to say that there are not have any content is benefit to kids, of course there are some channel about science and education can teach them a lot beside the school, but, the fundamental purpose of TV is entertainment and most channel is make for adult.
In sum, watching TV has more negative effects than good influence on childrens, we should restrict the time that childrens watching TV strictly, meanwhile, kids could watch some positive channel on TV under the monitor from the parents, by doing so, we can make sure that childrens could healthy growth and focus on their study
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