Writing a intro for my portfolio, is there something I can improve? :) Hey guys, I just wrote this intro about my design portfolio, my focus is on design, and I intended to use my another hobby magic to help this short paragraph. I would be really appreciated if someone could help me check my sentences, and make it much natural and emotional. If there is anything you don't understand, please let me know! Thanks! "As a designer and a close-up magician, I would say that design and magic are quite similar. Both are about creating something new, different, and exciting. However, none of these is easy. Mastering one sleight of hand needs months of practice in front of a mirror, and the more you learn, the harder it was to get even better. but when I create emotion and bring that moment of imagination to my audiences, that laugh with awe and wonder is all need to keep me going. Same as design, and I think we both know that it is an endless adventure with challenges along the way. But when the problems become opportunities, when inspiration comes to mind suddenly, when the marker is drying on the paper, the hot pixel and noise are fading in the rendering software, the product is really being manufactured in the factory, and everything is simply worth it."