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Distance learning and online computer classes should replace classroom learning I think that online computer and distance learning will never replace classroom learning because it is really important in basic levels of education like elementary and middle school. First, when we are young and we are at school sometimes we have to learn something that we do not like, for example, I did not like math because it was difficult for me but even if I do not like it I had to learn it to have an integral education. Despite this situation it was no terrible for me because some of my friends were in the same situation, se we could study together or solve our problems in group, if we had had online computer classes we would not be able to share this experience and probably it would be more difficult. The knowledge that you get can be the same in a classroom or at home but even if you learn the same you are going to miss some experiences, games and you are not be able to make friends, something that in my opinion is crucial when you are young. Second, if you want to take classes through your computer you should be an autodidact and organized person, moreover you should be responsible, you will have to study even if you do not like the subject and I think that is the most difficult part of study online and by yourself. To conclude, I think that distance learning is a good option when you are at high school or if you want to improve some skill or learn more about some topics or areas.

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Distance learning and online computer classes should replace classroom learning

I think that online computer and distance learning will never replace classroom learning because it is really important in basic levels of education like elementary and middle school.

First, when we are young and we are at school sometimes we have to learn something that we do not like, for example, I did not like math because it was difficult for me but even if I do not like it I had to learn it to have an integral education. <--- The sentence can be reworded like this: Primarily, at a young age, we have to study topics we do not like very much. For example, I did not like math because it was difficult for me, but even though I did not like it, I was still necessary to learn as an integral part of my education. Despite this situation, it was not terrible for me because some of my friends were in the same situation. We could study together or solve our problems in group. If we had had online computer classes we would not be able to share this experience and it may have been more difficult.


The knowledge that you get can be the same in a classroom or at home, but even if you learn the same you are going to miss some experiences, games and you are not be able to make friends, something that in my opinion is crucial when you are young. Possible Rewording: The knowledge you gain in a classroom can be similar with online education, however, the experiences are different. You may not be able to play games or make friends which, in my opinion, is crucial when you are young. 


Second, if you want to take classes through your computer you should be an autodidact and organized person. Moreover you should be responsible. You will have to study even if you do not like the subject and I think that is the most difficult part of studying online alone.

To conclude, I think that distance learning is a good option when you are at high school or if you want to improve some skill, topics, or areas.


Good job overall. I had trouble understanding just a couple of sentences because of how they were put together, but it wasn't bad. Sigue Asi! 

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