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Northern Lights I´m the kind of person who thinks things a lot. I live a quiet life without big experiences and emotions, even it might be said it´s boring but when I watched a documental about Northern Lights in the North Pole , I knew that I had to go to watch it. It´s a show of the nature and I thought that I had to see it because it´s not the same in a screen that to watch it there . So I decided to turn a dream into reality. I travelled in January, it´s the best season for this, I had lucky because of the sky was clear , so I could marvel at the beautiful colors of the sky when the sun rises in that part of the world. I was speechless due to those unique lights. I´d recommend this experience because it makes you understand how insignificant and tiny we are in front of nature and how wonderful it´s our planet. The best things in life are free. I prefer less material goods and more experiences in my life.

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Shayna thank you very much for your words and your corrections, they are very useful.
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I can imagine how you felt seeing the Northern Lights. I watched them in Alaska many years ago and was amazed how the curtains of light just hung in the sky.
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Hi Luti! I really like this story, and it seems like you had fun seeing the lights. This story reminds me of how my grandma had wanted to see the lights before she passed away recently. She never got the chance to go, but I want to see why she found them so fascinating. The edits I made were to make the sentences sound more natural. Also, please be careful to use the right apostrophe symbol ‘ . Again, thanks for the wonderful read!
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Northern Lights

I’m (be careful to use the right apostrophe symbol ‘ ) the kind of person who thinks things a lot. I live a quiet life without big experiences and emotions — even it might even be said it’s boring — but when I watched a documentary about Northern Lights in the North Pole, I knew that I had to go to watch it see them in person. It’s a show of the about nature, but and I thought that I had to see it because it’s not the same in a screen that it is to watch as it is watching it there. So I decided to turn a dream into reality. 

I travelled in January, it´s which is the best season for this. I had gotten lucky because of the sky was clear, so I could marvel at the beautiful colors of the sky when the sun rises in that part of the world. I was speechless due to those unique lights.
I’d recommend this experience because it makes you understand how insignificant and tiny we are in front of nature and how wonderful it´s our planet is. The best things in life are free. I prefer less fewer material goods and more experiences in my life.

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