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The graph shows the consumption of fast foos by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.
Overall, the consumtion of fish and chips experienced a downward trend. In contrast, the consumption of pizza and hamburgers rose significantly.
The consumption of fish and chips declined from 100 times eaten per year to 40 times eaten per year for teenager.
The consumption of pizza consistently increased, reaching a peak of almost 85 times in 1995 and then it levelled off.
The number of hamburgers eaten from Australian teenager sharply increased, overtaking over time other products.
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The graph shows the consumption of fast foos food (possibly fast foods, could be either but the singular sounds more natural) by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.Overall, the consumtion consumption (minor typo) of fish and chips experienced a downward trend. In contrast, the consumption of pizza and hamburgers rose significantly.
The consumption of fish and chips declined from 100 times eaten per year (a bit of a clumsy expression... "eaten" is already contained in the "consumption" at the start of the sentence, so perhaps just "from 100 times per year" ) to 40 times eaten per year for each teenager.
The consumption of pizza consistently increased, reaching a peak of almost 85 times in 1995 and then it levelled off. (Not quite sure how it consistently increased if it then levelled off though, so needs a little more explanation eg "initially consistently increased")
The number of hamburgers eaten from by Australian teenagers sharply increased, overtaking over time other products. (bit more elegant to say "overtaking other products over time" rather than the other way round)
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