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How old do you want to marry usually
Now, more and more people don't want to marry, they only like to talk about love only. In China, when the a girl's age is over 30,most people all think she is too old,to be a overage girl. She's Her parents、relatives、colleagues、neighbors and friends are all would be worried about her. Many boys don't like overage girls. So, many girls hurry up to find boys to marry usually when she is they are about 25. How old do you think is the age of marriage usually?
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Now, more and more people don't want to marry, they like to talk about love only. In China, when a girl's age is over 30, most people think she is too old. Her parents, relatives, colleagues, neighbours, and friends would be worried about her. Many boys don't like overage girls. So, many girls hurry up to find boys to marry usually when they are about 25. How old do you think is the age of marriage usually?
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I think, on average, people marry between the age of 25-30 in Canada, or between 20-25 in China.
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