Can you check this? I tried to answer these questions and Can you read and check it . what do you suggest to make my sentences more effective? Introducing your hometown Adding background information Talking about what you like and dislikes about Talking about how it’s changed over time I live in Istanbul. It is the most developed and the largest city in Turkey. Also, it is the only city in the world which has lands on two continents: Asia and Europe. Besides these, it is an ancient city which was the capital of three major continents: Roman, Byzantine and Ottoman. It attracts many visitors because it is famous for its magnificent landmarks such as Hagia Sofia, Blue Mosque and Grand Bazaar. You can see the affects of diverse cultures, nations and religions from the history. It is a beautiful place with its natural beauty and multireligional background. I have lived there for all my life and I can never imagine myself living in another place. So I really like living there. I think I can reach anything I want easily. However, it is a bustling city. Cost of living is going up every year. It is really difficult to make ends meets if you don’t have a house or higher wages. Traffic can also be an another issue. It is difficult to find parking area. There is traffic jam at certain hours in a day. Transportations are always crowded you can not find a place to sit when you get on the bus. So it can be exhausting to live there in some cases. Istanbul has changed in the last twenty years. It is unrecognizable when you look old city photos. The city has expanded physically and economically. The transportation system is getting better. It is easy now to reach anywhere by using transportation. People’s demand of living in huge apartments has shaped the appearance of city. I can say it is an old and modern one now. Furthermore, population is getting higher and I think this brings the problem of solitude, isolation and insecurity. You can’t feel sense of community in the city.