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Today i am going to write about the emotions.
My only emotion problem is to my younger brother. he aways makes me angry. i'm totally out of control when he make mistakes or he cry. he crys almost everyday. and he is 9 years old already. ok. i have to admit that most of his weeps are from my angry.
I even threw the book to the floor with all my strength last night. then i went to the bathroom after i did this. i don't know if it was frightend him. but i feel guiltly. and yes. most of times i feel guilty after i yelled at him. i'm getting worse . i never throw books before. last night i did that just because he couldn't recite the article. he got a whole afternoon to recite it. what makes me angry is not he can't do it. it's about his attitude. he didn't put his heart on it. i always say : you should learn how to foucs on things. especially about memories. but he never do.
But still. I think i was wrong. i have no right to treat him like that. whatever. he is a person. As an individual .
Exam score is not everything . only i should do is encourage him. encourage him change his study attitude. with more patience when i talk to him. show him my love instead of angry.
Be angry to someone is useless. I will change myself.
Sorry. I will not yelling any more !
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my story -1
Today i am going to write about my emotions.My only emotional problem is towards my younger brother. He aways makes me angry. I'm totally out of control when he makes mistakes or he cries. He crys almost everyday. And he is 9 years old already. Ok, I have to admit that most of his tears are from my anger.
I even threw the book to the floor with all my strength last night. Then I went to the bathroom. I don't know if it was this that frightened him but I feel guiltly, and yes, most times I feel guilty after I yell at him. I'm getting worse . I never threw books before last night. I did that just because he couldn't recite the article. He had a whole afternoon to recite it. What makes me angry is not he can't do it. It's about his attitude. He didn't put his heart in it. I lways say : "you should learn how to focus on things. especially memories", but he never does.
But still, I think I was wrong. I have no right to treat him like that. Whatever, he is a person, an individual .
The exam score is not everything . I should only encourage him, encourage him to change his study attitude, with more patience when I talk to him, and show him my love instead of my anger.
Being angry to someone else is useless. I will change myself.
Sorry, I will not yell any more !
Very well written!
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