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I'm practicing making sentences with the vocabulary i have learned. [ Dabble ] I dabble a lot of subject in art such as drawing, singing, and fine art but my truth passion are for illustration. [ Exquisite ] Yesterday when i saw that exquisite bag, I was so eager to get it for my love one on our anniversary next month. The price is beyond my saving so i put extra effort by working part time job at night and in the weekend to earn enough money to buy the bag just for her. [ Lethal ] The sword that the warrior used was very lethal, it have been dip in a venom of the most poisonous snake. [ Devastated ] When my uncle told me that my twin got into an airplane crash, I was devastated, he is my brother, my best friend and my only family member i have left. [ Inevitable and Dastardly ] It's been 2 years since i meet with my dastardly auntie, to be truth i don't really favor meeting with her because of what she had done to me and my brother in the past, but is inevitable that we will meet her again at grandma's house this weekend for family gathering.

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I'm practicing making sentences with the vocabulary i have learned.

[ Dabble ]
I dabble a lot of subject in art such as drawing, singing, and fine art but my truth passion are is for illustration.

[ Exquisite ]
Yesterday when i saw that exquisite bag, I was so eager to get it for my love one on our anniversary next month. The price is beyond my saving so i put extra effort by working part time job at night and in the weekend to earn enough money to buy the bag just for her.

[ Lethal ]
The sword that the warrior used was very lethal, it have been dip was dipped in a the venom of the most a poisonous snake.

[ Devastated ]
When my uncle told me that my twin got into an airplane crash, I was devastated, he is my brother, my best friend and my only family member i have left.

[ Inevitable and Dastardly ]
It's been 2 years since i meet with my dastardly auntie, to be truth i don't really favor meeting want to meet with her because of what she had done did to me and my brother in the past, but is inevitable that we will meet her again at grandma's house this weekend for family gathering.

*** She sounds like an interesting aunty. Inevitable suggests that something is likely but you way "this weekend" and that sound more than likely.

Good work.



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I'm practicing making sentences with the vocabulary i have learned.

[ Dabble ]
I dabbled  in art such as drawing, singing, and fine art but my true passion is In illustration.

[ Exquisite ]
Yesterday, when I saw the exquisite bag, I was so eager to buy it for my love on our anniversary, next month. It's pricey and beyond my savings, so, I made the  effort to  work part time job to earn enough money to buy the bag.

[ Lethal ]
The sword that the warrior used was very lethal, it had been dip in venom of the most poisonous snake.

[ Devastated ]
When my uncle told me that my twin was in an airplane crash, I was devastated, he was my brother, my best friend and my only family I had left.

[ Inevitable and Dastardly ]
It's been 2 years since I met my dastardly aunt, to be honest I didn't  really like meeting with her. What she had done to me and my brother in the past is inevitable that we will meet her again, at grandma's house this weekend. 


Okay, I'm on my phone might I suggest keep sentences tight and clear, sometimes adding in extra words is unnecessary and wastes words. Keep your eye on your punctuation with I. And practice past tense to help with consistency in your writing. Hope this helps.

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