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Correct my diary please Today is a sunny day I spend time on my major class.The sun very hot

make me feel not good,I wear a black shirt in meky mouse

At half past nine I went to a baby house to do some design in light like a cloud

The baby in there were lovely run everywhere ,when I was walking,a boy touch me in back, I told him he was a lovely boy, and he didn't talk anything just smile like a angel ,and then I did my work still 12:00pm

Lunch time we ate something like checken , and many kinds of vegetables .I think it's taste good and I love it ,study in TaiWan is not bad because of the life here not like I live in mainland before, in my

Hometown our life speed quickly ,and everyone want to be more and more harder, but here you can keep slow speed to life ,as a university student I needn't to worried about future , but I worried about future still,how to take part in my hometown's life only a way hard working everwhere .

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Correct my diary please

Today is a sunny day. I spent time on my major class.The sun was very hot.

It made me feel bad. I wore a black Mickey Mouse shirt.

At half past nine, I went to a baby house to do some design in light like a cloud

The babies in there were lovely. They were running everywhere. When I was walking, a boy touched me on the back, I told him he was a lovely boy, and he didn't say anything, he just smiled like an angel, and then I did my work until 12:00pm.

At lunch time we ate something like chicken, and many kinds of vegetables. I thought they tasted good and I loved it. Studying in TaiWan is not bad because of the life here, not like my life on the mainland before. In my hometown the pace of life is so fast, and everyone wants to work harder and harder, but here you can go slowly, as a university student I needn't worry about the future, but I worry about the future still, how to take part in my hometown's life only a way hard working everwhere .

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