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Would you please Correction mistakes in This Story. Three friends were traveling in a boat in the sea, and they lost their way. Sometime later everyone got hungry and started searching in the boat to find something to eat. Finally, they have found an apple in a corner of the boat. Everyone wanted to eat the apple. But, it was not enough for all. They all agreed on a dream competition that everyone will get sleep and later we will tell our dreams to each other if anyone had a great dream, he will be the winner and will eat the apple as well. After a while of sleeping, everyone got awake and started their dream story. The first one said I have dreamt that I was in (Madena Manawara-Saudi) and was circling from The Kaaba. The second one said that I was on the airplane and was searching above the sea to find the way. And the third one was silent and sad his friends asked him what did you see in the dream. He replied, I was very hungry and could not get sleep and I ate the apple.

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Three friends were traveling in a boat in the sea, but they lost their way. Some time later everyone got hungry and started searching in the boat to find something to eat. Finally, they have found an apple in a corner of the boat. Everyone wanted to eat the apple, but it was not enough for all. They all agreed on a dream competition that everyone would go to sleep and later they would tell their dreams to each. If someone had a great dream, he would be the winner and would eat the apple as well.

After a while of sleep, everyone woke up and started to tell their dream stories. The first one said that in the dream he was in (Madena Manawara-Saudi) and was circling from the Kaaba. The second one said that he was on the airplane and was searching above the sea to find the way. And the third one was silent and said that in the dream his friends asked him what he saw in the dream, and he replied, "I was very hungry and could not fall asleep, so I ate the apple."

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