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Telecommunication Services in Afghanistan. After the overthrown of the Taliban regime in Afghanistan. For the first time a private telecommunication named AWCC (Afghan Wireless Communication Company). Has begun its activities in Afghanistan. The company has highly welcomed by Afghans (especially by Afghan businessmen) and has got/found a lot of customers throughout Afghanistan. The prices of this company were very expensive at the beginning. Soon after, a new telecommunication company named Roshan has come to Afghanistan and started its telecommunication services in Afghanistan, with the arrival of this new company some positive changes have come but the prices were left at the same level. After three years, again a new company has come to market named MTN in presence of these three companies the prices were at some level as usual. In 2009 a new telecommunication company has come to Afghanistan this company brought revolution at the prices and attract the attention of many people in Afghanistan. Telecommunication has a lot of benefits in any country in the world such as keeping in touch with family, relatives, friends, and it’s very useful for online business. For farmers, they can contact in the market for price, stock, requirement before sending their dairy products to market. It has a huge positive impact on the economy, environment, and health of a country, and other parts of society. And has some negative impact on the society as well.

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Telecommunication Services in Afghanistan.

After the overthrown of the Taliban regime in Afghanistan, a private telecommunication named AWCC (Afghan Wireless Communication Company) had for the  first time begun its activities in Afghanistan. The company has warmly welcomed by Afghans (especially Afghan businessmen) and has found many customers throughout Afghanistan. The prices of this company were very expensive at the beginning. Soon after, a new telecoms company, Roshan, came to Afghanistan and started its services in Afghanistan. With them some positive changes came but the prices stayed the same. After three years, again a new company has come to market named MTN. However  prices remained the same as usual. In 2009, yet another telecoms company has come to Afghanistan. This company brought revelation at the prices and attract the attention of many people in Afghanistan*. Telecommunication brings a lot of benefits such as keeping in touch with family, relatives, friends, and it’s very useful for online business. Farmers can contact the market and check price, stock, requirements before sending their dairy products to market. It has a huge positive impact on the economy, environment, and health of a country, and other parts of society and some disadvantages, too.

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