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5 November, 2018 In November 3-4, The college I go held the campus festival, which is called "WASEDA-SAI".( "SAI" means festival in Japanese.) This is the biggest campus festival in Japan. The number of visitors is over 180,000 just for the 2 days. There are food stands, shows, stage performances, and so on.

I worked as a stage management supporter and I prepared a lot for this event. Thanks for the cooperation of many people, the festival was absolutely successful. It was very wonderful for me to be involved with such a excellent stage appearance. I was so relieved and cried.

I felt the growth of my friends and took many pictures.

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5 November, 2018

In November 3-4, The college I go to held a* campus festival, which is called "WASEDA-SAI".( "SAI" means festival in Japanese.) This is the biggest campus festival in Japan. The number of visitors is over 180,000 just for the 2 days. There are foodstands, shows, stage performances, and so on.

I worked as a stage management supporter and I prepared a lot for this event. Thanks for to the cooperation of many people, the festival was absolutely successful. It was very* (quite) wonderful for me to be involved with such an** excellent stage appearance. I was so relieved and cried.

I felt the growth of my friends and took many pictures.

*Using "quite" would make the sentence sound more mature, if you would like this to be your goal.

**A/An, use "an" when the following word starts with a vowel; "a" when it starts with a consonant.

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